OUGD601 Context of Practice 03 Tutorial No. 2 and Writing so Far

I had my second tutorial with Richard today and we talked about my first draft of my first chapter, which is shown below. (still yet to do the last section on temporal alienation and Jameson) The pink areas of text are either references that need to be checked or the notes that Richard gave me for improvement.

The main notes were to include some of the more iconic quotes of each theorist, to include the idea of commodity fetishism in the marx section and to use a few longer quotes in separation to the text to allow deeper reading of specific aspects of the theory.

Dissertation draft (1) from Crystalbeth